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Second Digital Photo Contest, Vancouver, Canada, 2015
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Bahman Doustdar
Title: Distorting Windows
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Critiques |
| Satya Danu |
6 |
The subject is well-placed; the diagonal lines add a pleasing contrast.
Unfortunately, the highlighted part on the building looses details. You might want to try again at different light options. Or, if you shoot in RAW you will be able to diffuse the highlight in Photoshop without loosing details.
(See my example in Caroun's Satya Danu Gallery)
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| Richard Shapka |
8 |
The composition works well with the negative space providing a balance with the mass of the building. Compositional detail is enhanced with the way the building detail breaks in places for added visual interest. It is a simple composition that works.
The image-maker could have easily enhanced the detail in the blacks or dark places at top of building and bottom layer of bricks with a curves adjustment. A graduated neutral density filter could have assisted in brining out this detail as well.
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| Larry Breitkreutz |
7 |
Reflection well captured. The oblique lines running through the image add energy.
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21 |
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