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Second Digital Photo Contest, Vancouver, Canada, 2015
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Iraj Roshani
Title: Nomadic Window
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| Satya Danu |
7 |
This image holds potential for this theme contest. I suggest you revisit (if possible) at a different time of the day, without getting all the shadow lines of the tree. It creates restlessness. See how pleasing simplicity can be to the eyes, and the mind.
“Nomadic” is somehow misleading. How can a solid wall have a nomadic function? Don't Nomads pack and take everything with them?
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| Richard Shapka |
8 |
The shadows and texture make this an interesting image. A picture made a good time of day, adds dimension and interest.
It is a simple composition framed by the cacti. While the window is central (in terms of composition), it works because of the metal piece on the upper right.
Excellent tonal range adds to the composition. Suggest that the image-maker experiment by lightening slightly the darkest shadow under the top sill of the window. All the detail is there, it just needs to be brought out.
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| Larry Breitkreutz |
6 |
Good composition. Shadows add interest. The exposure was a challenge. Light was quite harsh.
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21 |
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