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14th Annual Photo Contest, Vancouver, Canada, 2020




Daniel Soheili

Title: Calm



Jurors Scores Critiques
Richard Shapka 6 Good subject for B & W rendition. One can see the eye (important), although it is dark. Shadow behind neck adds some apparent dimension. Water droplets on next add interest.

It would be good to see more of the goose, even if more central. Consider bringing more detail in next by taking shadows in L Room. Use healing brush to remove some of white and black spots in the water, and tone down the water streak that flows into goose’s beak.
   
Kerri-Jo Stewart 7.5 Love the composition!
Difficult image to get the full detail in both highlights and shadows but important part is there.
Black eye (no highlight) is unfortunate
   
Henry Schnell 7.5 Well focused image, interesting placement, try reducing left edge slightly, light colored wave reflection distracting
   
Total Score: 21
   

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