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14th Annual Photo Contest, Vancouver, Canada, 2020




Darianaz Gharibani

Title: Point of View



Jurors Scores Critiques
Richard Shapka 7.5 Good thinking to capture the photographer against the wall mural, specially where she is posed. Exposure is good while depth of field could be more open to provide more isolation of subject photographer.

Shading or contrast on right side of image adds some dimensionality.

Not certain what the two white lines framing the eye on the mural achieve. If this is placed on in post processing, it takes away from the photo. Emphasis on the mural eye could be achieved by subtly darkening the eye using a New Layer to lightly brush in some shadow or Overall darkening.
   
Kerri-Jo Stewart 7 Nicely seen / Technically correct
Interesting shot with great placement of subjects / Lacks impact
Maybe shoot from lower to have same point of view from both subjects
   
Henry Schnell 7.5 Interesting juxtaposition of two subjects. Work with shadow adjustments. Steel bar above head draws eye away from main subject.
   
Total Score: 22
   

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