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14th Annual Photo Contest, Vancouver, Canada, 2020
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Saba Ebrahimpour
Title: P, like Papa
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| Richard Shapka |
7.5 |
Very touching, candid moment with both people sleeping and both with toques. Focus is good on subject but depth of field chosen does not isolate them in the image. The Papa and child are the center of interest but because of camera depth of field chosen everything is in focus and takes away from the importance of the subject.
Consider a small darkening vignette around them to isolate them or a very radical crop taking out as much of surroundings as can be accomplished.
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| Kerri-Jo Stewart |
6 |
Technically shot well / Story shows needed rest in busy situation / Weak composition, check around for other viewpoints
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| Henry Schnell |
8 |
Nice capture. Making the main subject tighter would improve story and reduce distraction. Lower left hand corner vignetting is dark.
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| Total Score: |
21.5 |
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