(One negative is all birds pasted are the same, would be stronger if they were in different flight phases. And more care in trimming.)
Richard Shapka
7
Motion (sky, water, birds) throughout the image shows some good artistic feeling. This composition, appears to be a composite, and is a bit heavy on the left side. It could be cropped square.
One would expect the light of the pinkish sky to bleed into the water or wave rush, but it does not. The bird wings in flight are very symmetrical. The title suggests this is planned.
Satya Danu
7
Where is the black coming from? Why is it so black? I take it that this is a water canon spouting? But besides from that, the left black spire would benefit from being cropped out and then the image has a lovely lighting and is intriguing with the birds flying in front of the water.
